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This is amazing, the ONLY thing I would recommend is making the head a little larger. This is amazing, the ONLY thing I would recommend is making the head a little larger.This is amazing, the ONLY thing I would recommend is making the head a little larger.This is amazing, the ONLY thing I would recommend is making the head a little larger.This is amazing, the ONLY thing I would recommend is making the head a little larger.This is amazing, the ONLY thing I would recommend is making the head a little larger.This is amazing, the ONLY thing I would recommend is making the head a little larger.This is amazing, the ONLY thing I would recommend is making the head a little larger.
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Critique by Stenchfury Oct 5, 2015, 1:13:49 AM
I agree with MTF40 that' there's something off about the head. Wich i don't think it's totally related to the size but more on how the hood rests on it.
Reduce the upper part a bit, so that it looks like there's less "space" beetween her head and the top of the hood.

The archway close to us it's also a bit off the perspective, feels like it's a very low archway.

Aside from those things, the rest looks awesome.



I agree with MTF40 that' there's something off about the head. Wich i don't think it's totally related to the size but more on how the hood rests on it.
Reduce the upper part a bit, so that it looks like there's less "space" beetween her head and the top of the hood.

The archway close to us it's also a bit off the perspective, feels like it's a very low archway.

Aside from those things, the rest looks awesome.
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ProjectVeritasLOOKUP Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016
I love it.
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:iconptitvinc:
ptitvinc Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2016   Digital Artist
thank yous  ;) 
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Grahamhorridge68 Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016
Cool I love it 
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:iconptitvinc:
ptitvinc Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016   Digital Artist
thank yous
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:iconlevyathyn:
Levyathyn Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2016
Welp, it's only the coolest thing I've ever seen period. No big deal.
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:iconptitvinc:
ptitvinc Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2016   Digital Artist
is that you have not looked at my favorie then! hahaha
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Alsalamek Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2016
Amazing
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:iconcormanater:
cormanater Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015
This is great, going to use this as inspiration for a NPC
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:iconptitvinc:
ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2015   Digital Artist
I'm very flattered thank you
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:iconsmiling-demon:
Smiling-Demon Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
awesome mate.
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:iconptitvinc:
ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015   Digital Artist
thank you my friend
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:iconbioazard:
bioazard Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015
magnifique !
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:iconptitvinc:
ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015   Digital Artist
merci 
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ReelDeviant Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wooow cte claque monumental *_*
au début je pensais à tribute à du hack n slahs comme Van Helsing ou Diablo III ^^'
qu'importe, sublime !
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ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015   Digital Artist
merci , cela fait toujours plaisir  ;) 
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gyappumusoka Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow! This is really sublime in many categories. The design of her attire, her pose, the coloring, all are amazing. One small critique would be that her head's size is smaller than it should be. 
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ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015   Digital Artist
Thank you for the compliment
so you're not the only one to tell me, I was not really in my preview done!
thank you for pointing me
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cabalito31000 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015
nice
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:iconsuper-her0:
Super-Her0 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Simply awesome!
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:iconptitvinc:
ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015   Digital Artist
thank yous ;)
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:iconmaehedrose:
Maehedrose Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
Fantastic outfit. 
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coMceptArt971 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
tu travaille bcp ac des layers? pour avoir cette netteté sur le 1er plan tu isoles?
très beau résultat tho! :)
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ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015   Digital Artist
pour etre franc oui beaucoup meme, c'est bien et pas bien finalement car cela me donne des difficultées pour bien marier les différents calques et a créer une atmosphère cohérente ! 
mais en meme temps cela me permet de bien creer mes plans et ma profondeur ;) 
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coMceptArt971 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
merci pr la reponse! et je comprend ton dilemne, ms justement je trouvais ton atmosphere coherente... perso jai tendence a collapser et ca me donne des resultats fuzzy, dc je vai essayer de garder mes layers separes,
merci pr la technique! ;)
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ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015   Digital Artist
mais de rien, disons que chaque éléments est sur des calques différents mais par dessus tous se petit monde, je rajoute des calques atmosphère ( brosse douce et flou avec faible opacité pour atténuer les contour et marier les couleurs  ) 


j'espère que cela te servira , fait bien attention a tes contraste , qui sont identique au première et au dernier plan ;) se qui n'est logiquement pas possible ! 
et une régle d'or ( que j'ai du mal à appliquer lol) pas de blanc pure n'y de noir pure  !!! 

bonne continuation suurtout
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coMceptArt971 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 6, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
oui effectivement jai du mal avec mes plans... resultat tres plat... :[
meme si jessaye consciensieusement que ca narrive pas... par expls mon entree pr le concours last witch hunter, jai vraiment essaye de creer une atmosphere entre les falaise au 1r plan et celll du 2eme plan ac les rayons ... resultat plat tt de mm. je struggle!
donc merci pr les conseils!:D
et SI tu as le tps, jaimerai tro que tu me critique une de mes illustration :D, si ta le tps bien sur, et je compren completement si tu peu pas :)
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ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015   Digital Artist
non je pense que je pourrait te faire cela ,

je ne sais pas quand peu etre dans la semaine ou celle d'apres , mais le mieux serait de faire un paint sur ta créa donc... je vais voir cela 
après je ne te promet rien je ferait de mon mieux biensur ou se que je peu lol 
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coMceptArt971 Featured By Owner Edited Oct 7, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
te sui tres reconnaissante! :D jatten avec patience, merci bcp! :)
Et en repassant ds ta gallery je vois bien ce qui doit etre fait... il faut que que je me discipline ou sois plus franche avec mes choix de couleur et ton... 
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H3Rl-E Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
The crossbow is so badass!
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:icontybertimus:
Tybertimus Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
Her head seems a little small. I'm guessing that's because you used reference for the face and tried to fit it into the rest of the drawing?
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ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015   Digital Artist
thank you for letting me get noticed! it's very nice of you
I actually use a model photo to paint the head, and suddenly I keep the same proportion I think! I did not notice me
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KillianSeraphim Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Student General Artist
This kicks so much ass.  Great work :)
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:iconptitvinc:
ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015   Digital Artist
haha thank you  ;)
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Futumbo Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Agreed.
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Daegann Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
wow ! le design du perso, de l'armure et de l'arbalète est hyper classe ! Et l'environnement est top aussi ! J'aime beaucoup !
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ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015   Digital Artist
merci beaucoup :)
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Prcalo Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
No critique here :) Love collors
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Jackal0fTrades Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
Niiiiiice! This character design & environment is so cool!
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:iconptitvinc:
ptitvinc Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2015   Digital Artist
thank yous :)
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21Mauricio21 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
Sweeeeeet! :la:
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LividCreativity Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay, that's REALLY amazing.
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XxShardedDragonxX Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow .
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tre-tokyo Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015
awesomeness
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